Darkened Hope Review

“Victory—warmth blossomed in her chest, and she smiled. I did it…I killed a dragon.”

Darkened Hope by J.L. Mbewe

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The Blurb:

The Secret Keeper is on the run, but does she know the secret she keeps? Ayianna is a cursed half-elf betrothed to Desmond, but her heart belongs Kael. After discovering the cure for the Sorceress’s curse, she and her companions embark on a dangerous quest to retrieve the ingredients. When dragons descend upon their party, Ayianna realizes the Sorceress is searching not just for the corrupted dagger, but a human sacrifice that will open a portal to the underworld. Battling deadly creatures and natural disasters, Ayianna is forced to confront her insecurities and conflicted heart. She must decide whether to be true to her family or true to herself. As the nations rally for war, betrayal threatens to destroy them all, and it’s a race against time to return before the curse destroys the plains people.

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My Thoughts:

Man, it’s tough to say all that I want to without giving away too much, but I’ll do my best.

Darkened Hope is the sequel to Secrets Kept by J.L. Mbewe (you can read a few of my thoughts on Secrets Kept in this post), and these are the first two books in the Hidden Dagger trilogy. This trilogy is an epic fantasy following the journey of Ayianna, a young half-elf.

I thoroughly enjoyed Secrets Kept, and so I jumped at the chance to read and review Darkened Hope. Despite my enthusiasm, I was a little unsure; sequels can be let downs. All manner of bad things can happen in sequels–the plot says bye-bye, forced character drama, character inconsistencies, no character growth, etc.–in a word: disappointing.

However, Darkened Hope did not hit any of those classic pitfalls.

Darkened Hope was even more engaging and nail-biting than Secrets Kept. I lost sleep over it (I think it was 12:55 am when I called it quits and went to bed on night/morning). The journey the characters are on is difficult and perilous, and since there’s a traitor on the quest, things get thorny (and also characters get killed because of this traitor and it’s stressful).

The description is sublime. J.L. Mbewe is absolutely masterful when it comes to detail and painting vivid pictures with words. The opening scene was perfect; I was instantly transported back to the world of Nälu through the exquisite prose.

Also, the worldbuilding is phenomenal. There are so many different nuances and prejudices in each culture. The landscape goes from mountains to deserts to cities to waterfalls to coasts as the group on their journey. (I love J.L. Mbewe’s worldbuilding so much that I asked her to do this guest post on Penprints.)

And there was romance between certain characters who I’ve been rooting for since the beginning of Secrets Kept, and things started to smooth out for them in Darkened Hope (my fellow shippers and I are so happy). *contented sigh*

And don’t get me started on the prince in this story (he’s my soulmate, peeps). This isn’t a cheery tale (it’s called Darkened Hope for a reason), but this prince (my soulmate) provides much needed levity. I lost count of how many times I laughed out loud at the one-liners that he popped into the story.

Now my words run dry (I know, I know–mark it on the calendar), and so I found visuals to help convey my feelings about this story (visuals are the best, peeps).

Darkened Hope made me feel like this:

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Awwww, they’re finally getting their heads on straight and becoming a couple!!!

And also like this:

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Oh my gosh!! My soulmate’s so wonderfully hilarious!!

And this too:

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WHAT??? WHAT??? That character’s DEAD???!?!?

And somehow also this:

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There’s no coming back from that cliff-hanger ending.

Yep. That’s about the size of it, peeps.

In conclusion, I highly recommend Secrets Kept and Darkened Hope to all fantasy lovers. The pacing is good, the characters are relatable and enjoyable, the world is stunning, the plot twists and turns, and the ending will make you feel like a dragon’s stomped on your chest (in a good way, guys).

Therefore, I give Darkened Hope four and a half out of five throwing, sleepless, and vivid stars as well as a PG-13 rating for violence.

Go buy it on Amazon.

P.S. – I received a free copy of Darkened Hope from the fantastic J.L. Mbewe in exchange for my honest review.

Nälu Worldbuilding: Behind the Scenes with J.L. Mbewe

Happy Saturday, dear followers! :)

Today  I have the privilege of J.L. Mbewe guest posting here on The Fox Hole!
She is the author of Secrets Kept, the first in her Hidden Dagger trilogy, and the second book in the series–Darkened Hope–just released earlier this month! Her worldbuilding has always floored me, and so I invited her over to talk about how she built Nälu.


The Post:

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The journey to Nälu has been over ten years in the making, and it’s getting harder to remember how the world of Nälu came to be. But I do remember that I had the characters and rough idea of the story. Ayianna, Kael, Desmond, etc. were just cardboard cut-outs at the time, although their names have changed considerably from the initial concept. As I was building the characters and the story, questions arose which pushed me to explore their backgrounds, their cultures, and customs. So it was kind of like a dance. A lot of two steps forward, one step back, and sometimes, I had to take five steps back before I could move forward one. Thus the world of Nälu grew up around them as the story grew from a thirty page rough draft into three novels that expanded into nine books.

In the early stages of writing the first draft, I sketched maps to get an idea of where everything was located. I LOVE maps, so I might have spent longer on it than I needed. But I had to get everything just right. I studied climates and world geography to create a believable terrain and weather interaction. The initial map went through several drafts until I finally solidified the final markings, but even then the names kept changing right up until Secrets Kept went to print back in 2013.

The nations and cultures that rose up were influenced by where they lived and my studies. I love the various cultures and ethnicities our world has and I wanted Nälu to reflect that. In Nälu, we have humans, elves, dwarves, feline-shapeshifters, merfolk, giants, fairies, and pygmies. As my story grew, my characters faced questions of their own histories and how that influenced their interactions with each other, their motivations, purpose, etc. The information kept growing and getting harder to manage. It was a beast! So I ended up creating an Excel document with all the nations and their influential events and people from the beginning of their recorded time until their end.

The second most important thing I had to nail down was the languages. I couldn’t have all these nations running around with only one language. Sure, I have the common tongue and Táchil, the language of Zohar and power. Then each race has their own language: Zjótharyn (elves), Tarôc (dwarves), Nihi (merfolk), Hazrul (feline-shapeshifters), Pyamor (giants), and even the jungle natives have one (Raklho). I love languages. I can hold my own speaking Spanish and know a few good phrases in Nyanja (hubby’s language). But I am no J. R. R. Tolkien. Now, I am going to tell you what I’ve only told a few people. The base of each language is a code. Yes. I know. I’m a hack. But it works. From the code, I used my knowledge of Spanish and Nyanja and tweaked it. But I had to stop by myself before I started creating a whole list of verbs to conjugate. Ack! There is a fine line between keeping it real in fantasy worlds and going too far. I don’t know if I will ever do that again for future worlds.

Once the foundation of each race was built (where they lived, what they look like, major history events, languages, textiles, agriculture, military, etc.), I started layering social customs. I created another Excel document with a worksheet for each race and started filling it out like a character sheet. How did they greet each other? Express sorrow? How did they treat/punish criminals? I wrote out their social expectations, educational system, laws, and such.

Building Nälu took years. I hope to take what I’ve learned through this and apply it to the future worlds I’m building. I do hope you all enjoy it.


The Blurb:

BSB Darkened Hope smallerThe Secret Keeper is on the run, but does she know the secret she keeps?

Ayianna is a cursed half-elf betrothed to Desmond, but her heart belongs to another. After discovering the cure for the Sorceress’s curse, she and her companions embark on a dangerous quest to retrieve the ingredients. 

 When dragons descend upon their party, Ayianna realizes the Sorceress is searching not just for the corrupted dagger, but a human sacrifice that will open a portal to the underworld. Battling deadly creatures and natural disasters, Ayianna is forced more and more to confront her insecurities and conflicted heart.

 Now she must decide whether to be true to her family or true to herself. As the nations rally for war, betrayal threatens to destroy them all, and it’s a race against time to return before the curse devastates the plains people.


The Author:

Writing as J. L. Mbewe, Jennette is an author, artist, mother, wife, but not always in that order. Born and raised in Minnesota, she now braves the heat of Texas, but pines for the Northern Lights and the lakes of home every autumn. She loves trying to capture the abstract and make it concrete. She is currently living her second childhood with a wonderful husband and two precious children who don’t seem to mind her eclectic collections of rocks, shells, and swords, among other things. Here, between reality and dreams, you will find her busily creating worlds inhabited by all sorts of fantasy creatures and characters, all questing about and discovering true love amid lots of peril. She has two short stories published in The Clockwork Dragon anthology, and four short stories set in the world of Nälu. Her debut novel, Secrets Kept, was nominated for the 2014 Clive Staples Award, and its sequel, Darkened Hope is coming May 2016.

Stay up-to-date with all things Nälu and her journey as a writer mama at JLMbewe.com. Connect with her on Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, and/or Pinterest.


A Chance to win the books:

The Darkened Hope Facebook Launch Party which is TONIGHT!!!! *throws confetti*

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There will be so many things that you can win at this party.

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The Grand Prize.

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Awesome playing cards.

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Groovy journal.

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Elegant mug and gift card.


Buy the books:

Here are links to buy Secrets Kept and Darkened Hope! (Oh, and btw–the Kindle edition of Secrets Kept is on sale for only $0.99 for this month only! Go buy it!)


The other stops on the tour!

The Fashion of Nälu.

An Interview with Prince Vian. (Guys, Prince Vian is one of my one true loves from fiction. You should go check out this interview with him.)

An Interview with J.L. Mbewe.

The Powers of Nälu.

The journey of The Hidden Dagger Trilogy and what it means to J.L. Mbewe.

P.S. – review of Darkened Hope forthcoming.

Darkened Hope Cover Reveal

Happy Monday, peasants my dear followers!

Today I have the pleasure of participating in the cover reveal for Darkened Hope by J.L. Mbewe.  Some of you may remember that I said it is one of the speculative fiction releases for 2016 that I’m most excited about, and let me tell you, this cover gets me even more jazzed!

So, I’ll quit blabbing and give you the good stuff!

Note: If you don’t know much about the Hidden Dagger Trilogy, go here to read up about the first book in the series, Secrets Kept.


 

The Blurb:

Ayianna is a cursed half-elf betrothed to Desmond, but her heart belongs to another. After discovering the cure for the Sorceress’s curse, she and her companions embark on a dangerous quest to retrieve the ingredients.

When dragons descend upon their party, Ayianna realizes the Sorceress is searching not just for the corrupted dagger, but a human sacrifice that will open a portal to the underworld. Battling deadly creatures and natural disasters, Ayianna is forced more and more to confront her insecurities and conflicted heart.

Now she must decide whether to be true to her family or true to herself. As the nations rally for war, betrayal threatens to destroy them all, and it’s a race against time to return before the curse devastates the plains people.


The Cover:

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Coming May 2016


About the Author:

jennette headshotWriting as J. L. Mbewe, Jennette is an author, artist, mother, wife, but not always in that order. Born and raised in Minnesota, she now braves the heat of Texas, but pines for the Northern Lights and the lakes of home every autumn. She loves trying to capture the abstract and make it concrete. She is currently living her second childhood with a wonderful husband and two precious children who don’t seem to mind her eclectic collections of rocks, shells, and swords, among other things. Here, between reality and dreams, you will find her busily creating worlds inhabited by all sorts of fantasy creatures and characters, all questing about and discovering true love amid lots of peril. She has two short stories published in The Clockwork Dragon anthology, and four short stories set in the world of Nälu. Her debut novel, Secrets Kept, was nominated for the 2014 Clive Staples Award, and its sequel, Darkened Hope is coming May 2016.

Stay up-to-date with all things Nälu and her journey as a writer mama at JLMbewe.com. Connect with her on Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, and/or Pinterest.


sk saleAnd as if that wasn’t cool enough, the Kindle version of Secrets Kept, the first in the series, is only $0.99 on Amazon right now!

This is an adventure that fantasy lovers won’t want to miss.

a princess no moreBut wait.  There’s more.  One of the short stories that goes along with the Hidden Dagger Trilogy, A Princess No More, is free on Amazon right now.  Free!  FREE!

Out of all the short stories, I think this one might be my favorite.  (This short story is tragic, so be sure you have some chocolate.  Lots of chocolate.  Just go get a bag of Doves.  Maybe two bags.  Yeah, probably two bags.  You’re welcome.)

princess no more saleSo, hop on over to Amazon to pick up your Kindle copies of this gripping stories!

Have a fantastic week!

P.S. – if you go over to J.L Mbewe’s website and sign up for her newsletter, you get an exclusive deleted scene from Secrets Kept so… go do that too. :)